Good job Ian! I can see a few litte tweeks here and there that might help thought. The distal phalanxs look oddly flat like they have been crushed rounding them out would add extra realisem to the model. Also the alingment of the thumb seems to be off. From the top, the thumps nail should be visible. the odd rotation that you have givin this thmb gives the apperance of a non opposable thumb, more attention to the carpometacarpal joint area is needed. Otherwise, nice work!
:O I love the knuckles at the beginning of the palm area!
I would have to say though that the knuckles along the joints of the fingers/thumb aren't accented enough. It feels a little too smooth along the joints.
I dunno all the lingo for hands, (distal phalanxs) but the nail areas need a little more rounding. It kinda looks like the guy's fingers were squished in a door or something.
Other than that, I think you've done a fairly good job, especially with the amount of time given to complete it.
Good hand model. It appears fairly accurate. It just seems like the hand (excluding the fingers) is a bit swollen. And I would like to see what the palm looks like.
For the most part it looks good. Its obviously looks like a hand. But it seems a little bit flat, like a rubber hand. Maybe some more definition for the knuckles. 75/100
I will need to see a wire frame and a post by hour thing to verify that it took only that long. I know it probably did but for the sake of others viewing this and to keep it within the requirements.
Cheers.
G
I also suggest doing this again, you will only get better. However I haven't seen the wireframe so I have no idea if you really nailed it or not.
Thanks for all the critique guys!! I posted this only as my first attempt, I've always done the drills twice and this one will be the same. I think that all your suggestions will help my final product a lot. I will focus more on the details as well. I spent 2 hours on this one not knowing we actually had 3 :o(
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Good job Ian! I can see a few litte tweeks here and there that might help thought. The distal phalanxs look oddly flat like they have been crushed rounding them out would add extra realisem to the model. Also the alingment of the thumb seems to be off. From the top, the thumps nail should be visible. the odd rotation that you have givin this thmb gives the apperance of a non opposable thumb, more attention to the carpometacarpal joint area is needed. Otherwise, nice work!
75%
:O I love the knuckles at the beginning of the palm area!
I would have to say though that the knuckles along the joints of the fingers/thumb aren't accented enough. It feels a little too smooth along the joints.
I dunno all the lingo for hands, (distal phalanxs) but the nail areas need a little more rounding. It kinda looks like the guy's fingers were squished in a door or something.
Other than that, I think you've done a fairly good job, especially with the amount of time given to complete it.
Well done!
75%
Good hand model. It appears fairly accurate. It just seems like the hand (excluding the fingers) is a bit swollen.
And I would like to see what the palm looks like.
80 - Good work.
For the most part it looks good. Its obviously looks like a hand. But it seems a little bit flat, like a rubber hand. Maybe some more definition for the knuckles.
75/100
I will need to see a wire frame and a post by hour thing to verify that it took only that long. I know it probably did but for the sake of others viewing this and to keep it within the requirements.
Cheers.
G
I also suggest doing this again, you will only get better. However I haven't seen the wireframe so I have no idea if you really nailed it or not.
Thanks for all the critique guys!! I posted this only as my first attempt, I've always done the drills twice and this one will be the same. I think that all your suggestions will help my final product a lot. I will focus more on the details as well. I spent 2 hours on this one not knowing we actually had 3 :o(
Where is your second hand attempt??? and Where is the wireframe... I need these before you can continue.
yippyson.blogspot.com is very informative. The article is very professionally written. I enjoy reading yippyson.blogspot.com every day.
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